*sigh* Another Valentine’s Day here, and alone am I.
I never get what I want…but…what is it I want?
The thought has crossed my mind, but only for a moment.
What do I want?
I want a girl who, for once, is as happy to see me as I am to see her.
A girl who is a little shy, but isn’t afraid to talk to people.
A girl who is pretty, but doesn’t care too much about it.
Who doesn’t wear a whole lot of obvious makeup. Maybe some bright lipstick though.
I want a girl who is casual most of the time, but likes being formal and elegant too.
A girl who has eyes that can give a piercing gaze, and at the same time are soft, the kind you’d get lost in.
A girl who likes to travel, try new things, see new places.
I want a girl who is smart, but not so much so that she’s not fun.
A girl who can laugh, and does so often.
A girl who knows what a "glomp" is...and who will know when to use it.
A girl who likes to cook, and who likes to be cooked for.
A girl who likes movies.
I want a girl who’s fine with surfing,road trippin' or just sitting under a tree together for a few hours.
A girl who’ll surprise me from time to time.
I want a girl who knows she wants children some day.
A girl who likes trivialities, but knows how to be serious.
A girl who reads the comics, and maybe draws a few of her own.
I want a girl who isn’t prudish, but not very far the other way either.
A girl whose very presence will cheer me up when I'm feelin' lousy
A girl I can hug, and occasionally squeeze nearly to death as well.
A girl who would still want a kiss, even when I’m sick and am worried about spreading it to her.
A girl who likes dogs.
A girl who is sorry for her mistakes, and reasonably accepting of mine.
I want a girl who likes the rain.
Who hates country music.
I want a girl who won’t get upset every time I see another female,
a girl who knows how much I really care about her, and isn’t too jealous
I want a girl who won’t “put up” with me, and will laugh when I’m stupid.
A girl who likes the ocean
I want a girl who prefers sunrises and starry nights over sunsets.
A girl who has a style of her own, doesn’t just copy every other girl.
I want a girl who...well...who wants me.
That’s what I want really. Not so much to ask is it? But…*sigh* since when do I get what I want?
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I’m not sure this really constitutes a poem, but who cares.
Well, as many of you should have noticed, it’s Valentines day. And many of you may or may not know this time of year makes me a sad panda. And like usual, I end up thinking about what kind of girl I want. Most of the time I shake myself out of that mindset cuz it depresses me. But today I kept going, and am not all that depressed about it. So here it is, a list of things I want (as the title suggests). (From here on you might want to read it first, but it’s not really important) I tried for 2 major things in this, 1) avoiding obvious physical features (I.E. Chest… need I say more?) 2)avoiding any real order. I think I did rather well, but let me know what you think about my decision to do so. Also, I think that I’ve been fairly reasonable with my list. Not that I’d be able to find a girl like this, that’s not the point. The point it that a girl with many of these traits is at least conceivable. Not just some fantasy, y’know? If you feel that there is one that isn’t reasonable, then by all means, crap on my ideas and tell me. Seriously though, if there is something you feel isn’t possible, let me know why. PLEASE don’t go on a feministic rant or anything about this. It’s not meant to seem as bad as anyone else thinks it might be. Anyway, just a little poem I felt like writing, so please let me know what you think. I feed on your back. Comments
 I know what you're thinking man... We all want that special person... And she is out there... It's just... we don't have the patience.
You obviously put alot of thought into it, and with my help we can spread it across the internet, and find that girl (or guy... who knows) for you, lol All of those are reasonable... and shouldn't be any reason there isn't a girl out there that has all of these mad skils -- "If you're good at something, never do it for free." - Joker, "The Dark Knight" Damn...patience sux don't it.
I didn't put too much real thought into it, I just ponder it from time to time...to time.  Well, I don't think we need to go to those great lengths. and I believe I mentioned the term girl a few times didn't I? well, I wasn't really looking for a male's perspective on reasonability, but thanks for your input. Glad you liked it. --  Nintendiehard here, lookin' for voice work. Still a voice acting amateur, but I has dreams as big as all-outdoors to be a pro one day. I'm just lookin' for some experience. So let me know if you wanna try me out, I'd love to audition. -N  AWwwwww, that is so adorable. Sorry, I know you were being serious but it is a really cute poem. ... Yeah, I know who you are talking about.
 ... well not personally or have any comunication with what so ever but this is that girl you talked about right? So cute.-- Click this link. [link] U won't regret it! OKAY!! Major Ed, Edd n Eddy fan here. You like the show? Word on the street is it ain't over if they get enough "please don't cancel the show"s. So, here! Save the show! http:/ What? what girl...Oh, yeah her.
No, it isn't her. There's a lot of things in my list tat she doesn't meet. It wasn't anyone specific, or likely existent either. Cute wasn't really my aim, but at least you liked it, nd for that I am thankful. -- Nintendiehard here, lookin' for voice work. Still a voice acting amateur, but I has dreams as big as all-outdoors to be a pro one day. I'm just lookin' for some experience. So let me know if you wanna try me out, I'd love to audition. -N  <333
i think you did a wonderful job. no offense, but som eof the things on the list made me laugh, ie "girl who hates country music"... i think you did v. well on this, and futher, that girl does exsist, because i have a few friends [including myself] that fit a wide variety of these traits. :]] GOOD LUCK awww, thanks!
It wasn't meant to be a really good poem, but I enjoyed writing it. No no, that's fine that you thought some things were funny. That makes me feel good for some reason, I really appreciate it. I've been really needing a giirls input on this one, thanks for your help. Oh you do, do you? Hate country music? Y'know, I'm curious. Reprint the poem, and do a little checklist thing on which criteria you meet. Lookin forward to seeing that! Thanks a lot for the comment, It means a lot to me! -- Nintendiehard here, lookin' for voice work. Still a voice acting amateur, but I has dreams as big as all-outdoors to be a pro one day. I'm just lookin' for some experience. So let me know if you wanna try me out, I'd love to audition. -N  Aww, that's cute!
And so true -.- If I was a dude  But so cute ^^ I'm sure you'll find someone -- Help #785 - How to get more pageviews Hey, you can't choose who you fall in love with. Be it a guy or a girl.
You can try to choose, but that's not real love. Besides, if you love a guy that doesn't make you any less human ^^ Just a comment ^^ -- Help #785 - How to get more pageviews I don't know. This one was pretty much just a big chance for me to whine, "Is that so much to ask?" Though it was nice to write anyway.
-- Nintendiehard here, lookin' for voice work. Still a voice acting amateur, but I has dreams as big as all-outdoors to be a pro one day. I'm just lookin' for some experience. So let me know if you wanna try me out, I'd love to audition. -N |
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